My encouragement for my son to take on guitar lessons is that I join him and take lessons as well. The way the teacher introduces a new guitar strumming pattern is a good example of the Curse of Knowledge(it is difficult for an expert to explain things). The teacher has the full song playing in his head so for him, the strum is a piece of cake. Me, lacking the full context it is just very hard to memorise those ups and downs in the right rhythm…
The same is true for your presentation. For you, your story is totally obvious, for the outsider it is not.